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How can you say you dont know me.
Contributed by
Butterflygirl40
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Friday, 29th January 2010 @ 11:07:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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How can you say you dont know me?
When I know you. I can take a knife and hit you with it.
And you still act like you dont know me.
I am someone from your past
Its like wearing a cast around your heart.
Seeing you breaks me into.
Its like someone stabbing me with a knife.
Stab me in my back.
I want to pack and leave.
But how can I
When all I can do is die and cry.
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2010-01-29 11:07:52]
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Re: How can you say you dont know me.
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Sunday, 12th February 2012 @ 04:59:41 AM AEST
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| this was a good poem read it plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz comment plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz on it...................................... |
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Re: How can you say you dont know me.
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by lisasolorio1 on
Sunday, 12th February 2012 @ 01:16:47 PM AEST
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Ok how about this one. Your poem, even though I understand your point of emotions your trying to show.... needs a little more work. But who am I? When your writing your poetry you feel from your head all the way down to your fingers down to the edge of your pen when the ink makes contact with paper. Thats your emotions, feelings, ect... it does not matter what anyone else says......
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