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Honor, Pride, and Respect
Contributed by
satanssecret1369
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Saturday, 30th January 2010 @ 01:16:57 PM in AEST
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Honor, pride, and respect
Terms these flies can't grasp quite yet
We were brought to life to pay our debts
Before our souls are put to rest
Yet in dark hours
Larva cowers
In garbage bags of rotting lies
Before bursting quickly into flies
Above the stench of rotted dreams
Transform to darker qualities
Contenders to this dreary life
They lost the honor and the pride
Left only with their last respects
They fly alone to pay their debts
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Re: Honor, Pride, and Respect
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by Mars on
Saturday, 30th January 2010 @ 06:05:00 PM AEST
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I particularly like the fly images.
"Before bursting quickly into flies." Would be my favorite line.
Keep up the good work.
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