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Pathetic Poet
Contributed by
JakerBaker88
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Sunday, 31st January 2010 @ 01:08:19 AM in AEST
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I like English well enough
But my poetry doth suck!
I cannot write profound things
In a long winding sing song ring.
I cannot write poetry at allat all!
For at my attempts ends,
They make little sense.
I jumble the words and fumble the lines
Mutilating good old Shakespearean rhymes.
So as one can see from my small little lyric:
I cannot rhyme,
Its a waste of time,
But thank you for your support and spirit,
In reading, yet, another sad attempt!
Copyright ©
JakerBaker88
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2010-01-31 01:08:19]
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Re: Pathetic Poet
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by Prism on
Sunday, 31st January 2010 @ 01:20:00 AM AEST
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| There should be no commas around yet at the end. I like the idea of it and if its worked with it could turn into something great. Gj ^^ |
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Re: Pathetic Poet
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by emystar on
Sunday, 31st January 2010 @ 02:07:16 AM AEST
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Well I like it as is. It's very creative and you have a great sense of humar.
Good work.
Huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Pathetic Poet
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by spud on
Sunday, 31st January 2010 @ 07:47:02 AM AEST
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Hi,
Oh that we all had the ability to judge and laugh
at ourselves! How well-balanced that would make
us.
Like your humour - keep it up!
Tommy
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