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Nobody's Child
Contributed by
myworld
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Sunday, 31st January 2010 @ 05:05:29 AM in AEST
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drugabuse
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Petite the little bundle Fragile as she seems Diffused, eyes cynical Gestures wary of the strangers
Her curled lips were distrusting Avoiding intimacy Body language averting In her eyes a lamentation
Bruised were her stubby fingers Aged through toil Ancient far surpassed her years She is nobodys child
She grieves silently Went unnoticeable Too feeble to dispute Nobody will comprehend
Flailing, she bleeds Crying without a sound Writhing, she pleads No one ever paid concern
As a rose before the bloom As if a seed, untended A tree, dead before the life She is nobodys child
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Re: Nobody's Child
(User Rating: 1 ) by spud on
Sunday, 31st January 2010 @ 07:41:31 AM AEST (User
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Hi,
Beautiful - but heartbreaking.
Tommy
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Re: Nobody's Child
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 31st January 2010 @ 09:40:26 AM AEST (User
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We unfortunatly live in a world which allows as well as condones this very scenario all her inner beauty forsaken as if she doesn't exist it's sad many have more contempt than compassion towards her your metaphors where so precise and the depth in them sting as often truth does this passage was amirably brave
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