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My Way Out
Contributed by
taizy_may520
on
Sunday, 31st January 2010 @ 01:33:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Standing alone
No one is near
Hard to breathe
Feeling fear
I'm so confused
Beyond lost
I must forfeit
At any cost
I didn't mean it
What I've done
Without choice
Life is my gun
It holds me down
Steals my breath
Seeks enjoyment
In my death
Kicking legs
Waving arms
Rolling eyes
Stopping heart
No more tears
Blinking quit
Time is coming
You should sit
Have to say
I love you all
Now you must
Watch me fall
One loud shot
All I hear
Everyone please
Have no fear
Steaming pistol
End is now
Waiting for
My final bow
Time has come
My forever rest
Please know
I tried my best
Copyright ©
taizy_may520
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2010-01-31 13:33:10]
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Re: My Way Out
(User Rating: 1 )
by catapult57 on
Sunday, 7th February 2010 @ 08:18:19 PM AEST
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| Wow.. i like the way you established this quick little metric rhythm that was very terse, very stacatto. . |
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