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Don't
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
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Monday, 7th April 2003 @ 09:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Don't promise me your heart
If I'm not the one for you
Don't look into my eyes
If you're not going to be true
Don't take my hand
If you're not going to stay
Don't say I'm the one you want
If you're just gonna walk away
Don't make promises
You know you cannot keep
Don't walk out of my dreams
I'd rather stay asleep
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Re: Don't
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 7th April 2003 @ 09:39:03 PM AEST
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Don't ever stop writing, ShadowsCloud.. This is lovely...
Jenni |
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Re: Don't
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 8th April 2003 @ 02:13:14 AM AEST
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excellent
Shari |
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Re: Don't
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by spaceotter on
Tuesday, 8th April 2003 @ 04:45:14 AM AEST
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| Nice.....I know how you feel. |
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Re: Don't
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by Wrybod on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 01:34:27 AM AEST
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Nice one! Some gems come in small packages.
Try my "Counting tears" It's the very thing you're trying to prevent.
I'm going on down your list now........... |
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Re: Don't
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 10:04:11 PM AEST
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| right on! excellent poem!! hugs nessa |
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Re: Don't
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 08:23:30 AM AEST
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If only those whom we're falling for didn't damn well do these things, life would be much more comfortable. But then maybe we need to be kept on our toes sometimes. But then again maybe they just shouldn't be said and done in the first place!
Very well written again Candice,
If only folks were just free with their feelings for each other, it'd be a nice and refreshing change.
I like this one lots also Candice, keep 'em coming.
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: Don't
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by ShadowsCloud on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 03:24:47 PM AEST
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Dean,
As you might have already figured out I wrote this while I was trying to deside whether or not to become Darik's girlfriend. I think that writing all of this down really helped. I am glad that you like this one so much.
ShadowsCloud |
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Re: Don't
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by wolfflow on
Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 02:38:21 AM AEST
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| a lovely poem, i love the last two lines, i also have to agree with the comment above, it would be refreshing if people were freer with their feelings, its when people inhibit their feelings or try to confine the feelings of others that things get screwed up. |
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Re: Don't
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by karoody on
Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 03:16:12 AM AEST
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absolutely right...when feelings are stifled, it only breaks hearts in the end...great write...i'm glad your writing helped you in your decision...
kara |
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