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Lights that dim
Contributed by
zedwards
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Monday, 1st February 2010 @ 05:45:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Well dim the lights down low
With candles and incents
Homemade electricity
Left with our shadows and thoughts
As our favorite vinyl
Spins a soft silhouette
Sitting in our room
We take a puff of life
As our bodies go numb
In a sea of calculated noise
Some people find Jesus
We found poets instead
Loneliness just a song away from cured
Years of dust collect in our ears
Caressing, touching, and making love
What is dead is folded alive in smoldering ashtrays
Listless smoke blown away
All we can do is listen
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zedwards
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2010-02-01 17:45:27]
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Re: Lights that dim
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st February 2010 @ 10:48:46 PM AEST
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Truly profound
the scene was very well depicted
especially for anyone who's been there
I love the sound of a vinyl spinning
the ocasional crackling or pop
true freedom in my mind
flawless passage found myself immersed
and rightfully so
-D.Truth |
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