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Withered in a Moment
Contributed by
shsusmoker
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Monday, 1st February 2010 @ 08:39:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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Smoke pouring in wisps between my lips,
a representation of the cremation I feel inside my soul.
Nothing I've had and nothing I've seen,
has promised to fill this aching hole.
We're like wildflowers swaying in the breeze,
the next day withered and blown beneath the leaves.
This life we're given is not ours to spend as we please,
he reminds me and I fall to my knees.
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Re: Withered in a Moment
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 2nd February 2010 @ 12:36:19 AM AEST
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| very powerful write despair our mortality resulting in complete humbling submission |
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