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Broken Instant
Contributed by
signalsovertheair
on
Tuesday, 2nd February 2010 @ 07:45:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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It's the Murmur of my conscious
Resounding in my chest
The sound of the wind
Echoing through a
burning building
The fruit of time
Pecked by the birds
It has fallen into the wilderness
A row of trees enclosing me,
Choked by the vines
Hung amongst the densities
Of green waves
Wave after wave they pass over me
Until nothing remains
Wave after wave
after wave
after wave
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signalsovertheair
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2010-02-02 19:45:57]
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Re: Broken Instant
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th February 2010 @ 03:02:37 PM AEST
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Very interesting read with a vivid, fairytale feel to it. Nice.
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