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journeys taken
Contributed by
wordsy
on
Tuesday, 8th April 2003 @ 05:11:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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And the sadness that does linger
when the tears have all been cried
and the sorrow that does follow
after eyes have long been dried
and the ever aching need
a wanting never met
and the pain that lives inside us
least we not forget
the hurt that lies behind us
in the dreams that fills our sleep
and the promises of tomorrow
we pray that fate does keep
to lead us ever on
so our faith be not forsaken
and keep us true
unto our path
this journey that we've taken
Copyright ©
wordsy
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2003-04-08 05:11:20]
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Re: journeys taken
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 10th April 2003 @ 08:33:20 PM AEST
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| Each time, I am amazed at your poetry. Always the flow, the rhyme are perfect....and the messages you send....wow. Another work of art my friend. Drinks are on me! Larry |
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Re: journeys taken
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 10th April 2003 @ 09:39:28 PM AEST
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| What a great journey & a great way to express it! Done beautifully! Christina |
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Re: journeys taken
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by WiL_CA on
Thursday, 10th April 2003 @ 10:57:53 PM AEST
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| beautiful poem |
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Re: journeys taken
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 09:26:54 AM AEST
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| hey, great poem, once again, I love your work, keep writing! |
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Re: journeys taken
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by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 02:01:29 PM AEST
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Love it. Great write. Blessed be,
~ Moonlit Angel |
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