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do you mind?
Contributed by
eshine
on
Saturday, 6th February 2010 @ 11:48:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Where were going?
Do we even know?
The misery were
Reaped up onto
Do you need more?
Do you know?
Everything is in your hands
Have you need much to ask
When your wrapped up in your world
Do you need someone?
Do you mind when I
Intrude your periphery?
Sorry I just had to
In my dreams I do
I intrude, such a rude intrude
I just had to
I feel its love
Some kind out of
This life, Out of this world,
Love, higher love
Do you even mind?
Copyright ©
eshine
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2010-02-06 23:48:08]
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Re: do you mind?
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by catapult57 on
Sunday, 7th February 2010 @ 09:04:04 PM AEST
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