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Portrait
Contributed by
catapult57
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Sunday, 7th February 2010 @ 04:18:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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She paints her name on palisades
her pedestal is empty as
she walks along the seashore
in the morning
in the rain.
In the mirror on her vanity
she makes herself austere--
the severe clutch of
blonde hair gathered,
tightly wound; and
she fingers at the buttons
on her bodice.
No finery, this pedigree she
carries is in attitude and
not in filigree or jewelry.
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catapult57
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2010-02-07 16:18:05]
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Re: Portrait
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th February 2010 @ 02:00:19 PM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful. This flows so wonderfully. The description is as soft and delicate as beauty itself with just a hint of mystery. :) A gorgeous write.
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Re: Portrait
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th February 2010 @ 11:56:31 PM AEST
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I love the way this seems to speak of a woman of beauty through who she really is instead of materialistic values. Very nice imagery too.
Thank you for an enjoyable read.
Tim |
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