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reminiscent
Contributed by
eshine
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Monday, 8th February 2010 @ 07:18:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Buffing away tears
Hatred rules over us,
Can never come to close
To The pain
I been subjected to,
Have I forgotten my youth?
Landscapes without a map,
No rules of thumb
Just my endless craft,
The eternal space above,
I used to paint the sky
Bright in all color chroma,
Everything had to shine
No one ever left behind,
Just my foolishness, set free,
My pain lies in sorrow
The sky has been painted gray,
Nothing feels good, nothing seems
As if were in a herd, lost faith
Death rules over our nature,
The sun bowed down
I dont want to go forth, stay
Im not dead to seek hell yet,
I just want the sky painted blue
And everything else in colors a new,
Copyright ©
eshine
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2010-02-08 07:18:52]
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Re: reminiscent
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by longhaircg on
Monday, 8th February 2010 @ 09:42:55 AM AEST
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I feel this too, if we could paint the sky blue.
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Re: reminiscent
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th February 2010 @ 09:49:58 AM AEST
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Pain highlighted by bright colors. Darkness pulling you one way but leaning towards the light. This is well done.
"Landscapes with out a map"
I really like that.
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