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Breaking away
Contributed by
recyclebin
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Monday, 8th February 2010 @ 08:03:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Im feeling this feeling inside of me. Dont know where Im going, you see It's tearin a hole, under your control I cant believe the years you stole.
You will never take that from me. You will never see. I will never be. Who would ever known where Id be today You never believed in my yesterday.
Now Im cryin, Im dyin to see my future havin' sewn my heart with a natural suture Now everyone respects me, life is never steep. No one will ever take that from me, wake me from this sleep.
I never gave up, Im not afraid Barely breathing in the shade, Im on an ambitious crusade. I have reached the peak, you could never see I disagree; the view looks beautiful to me.
Dont know where Im going, you see But I see my soul fleeing, The lord has been my friend, keeping me from condescending I wont bend, pulling my life from the end.
Now the end is the beginning The beginning of a whole new thinning. The purpose to shine in the blind My mind free to unwind from the thick outer rind.
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Re: Breaking away
(User Rating: 1 ) by MoonlightKiss on
Tuesday, 9th February 2010 @ 10:40:24 AM AEST (User
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i love the imagery in this poem!
great job, it flows nicely as well |
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Re: Breaking away
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 9th February 2010 @ 04:37:04 PM AEST (User
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Nice work, Bin...
Good to see you again..
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Re: Breaking away
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Friday, 12th February 2010 @ 09:21:59 PM AEST (User
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Incredible Bin
I cannot pick a favorite part is is super start to finish
Michelle |
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