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My Dime.
Contributed by
AndreyFisht
on
Tuesday, 9th February 2010 @ 08:21:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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My dime fell down,
Equilibrium melt away,
I tried to grapple,
But had no way.
The gun is not mine,
Must be a stupid thing,
So said that blind dime,
Puting a finger on a trigger.
The cold was a metal,
The time was silent,
How smooth was lightning,
And how the shot was brilliant!
No headache,strange thing!
An empty shot without bang,
No way,and no blink,
What a strange and stupid thing!
My dime fell down,
No shooting more,
I went to the town,
I found metro.
The shot was so sharp,
My dime fell down,
I didnt see a result,
I simply crashed down.
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AndreyFisht
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2010-02-09 08:21:06]
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Re: My Dime.
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by Sinned on
Friday, 12th February 2010 @ 04:46:38 AM AEST
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So as I read this I see a person being shot and this is what he last sees before dying. So sad the poem itself to see no hope for the black community.
Ihis is America and all things are possible. We are one people with evil amoung us,but as one people we will one day accept one another as equal.
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