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Revenge
Contributed by
shortgurl2006
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Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 01:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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He looks at me with his innocent eyes
but I know he's feeding me lies
lies lies and more lies, why can't I learn
For it is he that I yearn
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To be with him day and night
for his face is a lovely site
deep down he's cruel, dark and ugly
but I thought he might still love me
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I thought he did but I was wrong
but I've loved him for so long
Do you think he can change his ways?
no maybe not because all he does is plays
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Is he worth is, hell who knows
but when i'm with him my heart glows
everyday I learn something new
like when he said he wanted to be with you.
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You he said is the love of his life
now here I go through the pain and strife
when I said I'd lend you a hand,
I never said I would lend you my man
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to love, to cherish, till death do us part
was what he said from the bottom of his heart
but now thanks to you
me and him are through
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why did you want to take him away?
sooner or later, I know you'll pay
you tool him from me, the man that i love
the one for me sent from above.
~SHORTGURL~
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Re: Revenge
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 05:51:04 AM AEST
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I truly believe that if someone can hurt you this much and not seem to care - he was not meant for you. There is someone out there who will give you the love and respect you deserve. The poem was very well written and the emotion poured out of it. Great work.
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Re: Revenge
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by shortgurl2006 on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 10:07:03 PM AEST
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Thanks sleepless, I have wrote more poems, more or less about suicide, and I think that they have more emotion in them than this one... I haven't gotten them posted yet, but I would really like it if you kept up with my poems and tell me what you think.
~*SHORTGURL*~
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Re: Revenge
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by Percursors on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 10:48:29 PM AEST
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| this is a really good one too...i've so been there before...it was when i was a lot younger but...anyways...good write...keep submittin' em... |
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