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Dear Hero
Contributed by
JakerBaker88
on
Tuesday, 9th February 2010 @ 10:01:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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You remind me of a courageous knight
Before he goes into battle, a beautiful
Melody strung from cupids arrow, the
Whisper of hope.
Your smile is as wide as a mile with
The glow of a golden sunset.
Your eyes are deep and all knowing
That carry within them multicolored
Flexes of serenity which boldly shine
Through you.
Your voice is soft like the crooning of a bird
Before its song, the flutter of a serenade.
Your personality blushing with the hues of honorable
Righteousness that make all cling to be forever
By your side, and in your countenance.
When I am with you I long to stop the ticking of Father Times
Clock so I can stay in your presence,
Which feels like paradise flown to earth.
Signed,
One love struck maiden.
Copyright ©
JakerBaker88
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2010-02-09 22:01:10]
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Re: Dear Hero
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th February 2010 @ 11:52:16 PM AEST
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Some inventive clichés here along with great imagery. Oh, and I do not mean anything bad about clichés as I myself am Mr. Cliché Man. 
Thank you very much for an enjoyable read.
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