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One pill, Two pill, Three
Contributed by
Jen_unknown_to_myself
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Wednesday, 10th February 2010 @ 05:00:35 PM in AEST
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One pill, Two pill, Three
Im tired of fighting,
Its high time I just give in,
My bruised heart will quit beating,
Soon I will see the end.
Ive thought for quite some time,
That its no longer worth it,
Its not worth a dime,
Ill be gone in a bit.
One pill, Two pill, Three,
One after another I take,
Faster, please,
Wish I had used a stake.
Six hours in,
I see your face,
No, dont stop it, let me end,
Your face was fake.
I realize now,
It doesnt matter,
Alive or dead, I bow,
To you, my master.
Take me or leave me,
Your help I need,
Please, oh Please.
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Jen_unknown_to_myself
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2010-02-10 17:00:35]
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Re: One pill, Two pill, Three
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th February 2010 @ 12:36:53 PM AEST
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While reading this I can feel the speed of the race to finish the suffering. You can feel the desperation. I enjoyed it.
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