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Fall With Me
Contributed by
CaBann
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Thursday, 11th February 2010 @ 07:06:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Tonight I ask you to trust me
and this thing we call love
We've been in these clouds for so long
we haven't loved until we've hit the ground
So tonight fall with me
We'll plant our feet in the earth
and make our way back to the stars
So hold on tight
and fall with me tonight
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CaBann
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2010-02-11 07:06:54]
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Re: Fall With Me
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th February 2010 @ 07:32:36 AM AEST
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Beautiful. I got a great visual in my head. =]
-hugs- |
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Re: Fall With Me
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by MoonlightKiss on
Thursday, 11th February 2010 @ 10:36:56 AM AEST
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i wish you would have
elaborated on this! it is
beautiful! but good job
for a short write :) |
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