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unthought
Contributed by
eshine
on
Thursday, 11th February 2010 @ 01:49:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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There was a time
When I used to wake up,
In the morning
Thinking thoughts made us all
There was a time
When I walked, and thought,
Through the delight of the day
Those thoughts made us all,
There came a time
When I fell to the ground,
On a day of the dark
That nothing is as I thought,
When time cease to exist
There I will be
In between serenity and the unseen
The twilight in the eyes and the unthought
Copyright ©
eshine
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2010-02-11 13:49:57]
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Re: unthought
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th February 2010 @ 08:00:46 PM AEST
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There is a dark science fiction feel to this poem and it is quite mysterious making the reader think of possibilities. I enjoyed it.
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