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Displaced Wings
Contributed by
jazzyfizzle
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Monday, 15th February 2010 @ 06:32:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Displaced wings make me less of an angel A devil in my ways makes me fallen from grace A fake smile makes my words worthless Empty emotions make my hugs nothing more than an embrace The sting from societal rejections lingers A Charming smile sails me through mental inspections A slipping grip grasping my reality Clouded glasses constantly warping my reflections Who to please? Who to disappoint? So many vibes turn my third eye blind When you keep your friends close and your enemies closer Who do you end up leaving behind? Eyes closed, sound muted. Sense of touch your only compass Let the worlds vibrations lead the way. Overcome by the instability of it all Pause, breathe. Everythings okay. Those who seek the truth are force fed lies Sprinkled with illusions to help with the taste What is a lie? Nothing more than contorted facts Perfectly harmless honesty gone to waste What am I? Useful? Useless? Nothing? Everything? Haunted by questions that plague me. Am I Intelligent? Ignorant? Are my epiphanies sheer brilliance or maybe just crazy. Will I ever know? No. As it seems only time will ever tell Which road am I to walk on? If I have only my mind and my soul left to sell? For I can survive, heartless without my soul But I cannot truly live with out my mind But without the sweet bitterness of emotion Ill be trapped, strapped to logic, eternally confined.
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Re: Displaced Wings
(User Rating: 1 ) by purplestary on
Monday, 15th February 2010 @ 10:05:32 PM AEST (User
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this is a very brilliant peice here. I love it. My two favorate parts are:
"When you keep your friends close and your enemies closer
Who do you end up leaving behind?"
"Those who seek the truth are force fed lies
Sprinkled with illusions to help with the taste"
what wise words you have written here.
thank you so much for posting this. |
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Re: Displaced Wings
(User Rating: 1 ) by northernlights on
Monday, 15th February 2010 @ 10:59:01 PM AEST (User
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The ever thinking mind like an endless ticking clock won't stop ticking with all the questions and insecurities of life,I like the declaration of humanity at the beginning displaced wings........fallen from grace,the journey and then the conclusion of endless thinking eternally confined, well written |
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