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About you?

Contributed by Libixe on Friday, 19th February 2010 @ 02:50:10 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



About you?

Once upon a day, i met a little babe
I only knew she is a gentle crazy
But my memories of childhood are hazy
After some years, when she was an older
At that time it started to be another.
I don`t know why?What happend? But she changed
Her life got a different look, It was exchanged
I don`t have the right someone tried
Every man is like a Dr. Jekyl and Mr. Hyde
Long time we didn`t meet, We never feel the beat
Smoke joints on the street, But something was incomplete.
All ths finallz happened, but somewhat still lacking
I often think about it ,But I am not a king.
(|sorry that I lie you but I think about us before)
I am feeling suppressing because her orientation
So I prefer to think about weed plantation
But one day she started this whole
When I read her sms, I discovered my soul
My heart began beat, I lost control
And at the night I fall in big Love
I don`t understand why she did do that.
I didn`t think, I feel no sad.
From my side was everything all right.
But she led inside the fight
I don`t know which side is the winner.
Good or Bad? It doesn`t matter.
I was happy, she too I think
She was good like a fruit drink
I love her, but I feel something
And certainly do not stink
Feelings. The second world drew her back.
I know that I am lost like a empty sack.
After one month she let me go away
But I still love her and wanna with her stay.
Now I understand all that things
And I am not angry, but I haven`t wings.
I cant fly away and forget it
I will be forever remember it.




Copyright © Libixe ... [ 2010-02-19 02:50:10]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: About you? (User Rating: 1 )
by ChaosFactor on Saturday, 20th February 2010 @ 09:42:30 PM AEST
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A classic story and sentiment. Simply lovely.


Re: About you? (User Rating: 1 )
by Libixe on Tuesday, 23rd February 2010 @ 05:57:22 AM AEST
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I don´t think is a classic story...because she is a lesbian :/




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