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Unaccompanied
Contributed by
sasha
on
Saturday, 20th February 2010 @ 06:38:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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The safe brilliance of my tender mornings
A hundred limpid dreams exchanged
Secrets I weave into my eternal dance
I hold them close, my essence awake
Every breath I breathe turns me around
Into myself, Edens at my doorstep
A thousand shards of my brittle wisdom
Scatter around, smiling from centuries
My evenings turn sienna, on a distant shore
Barefoot in the breeze from a solo life
My thoughts skip around every soul in flight
Catching million sighs like fireflies at nights
Copyright ©
sasha
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2010-02-20 06:38:13]
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Re: Unaccompanied
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 20th February 2010 @ 09:01:20 AM AEST
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Very descriptive, esp like a thousand shards of my brittle wisdom creates strong imagery can feel a real sense of freedom throughout
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Re: Unaccompanied
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Sunday, 21st February 2010 @ 05:11:31 PM AEST
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Hard to single out which lines are the best here, so many vivid images that dance off the page.
Everytime I thought "I like that line", another one to match it folllowed.
Well done.
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