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Forgive
Contributed by
Anaztasia
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Saturday, 20th February 2010 @ 11:00:51 AM in AEST
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Hurt is your enemy that with time you start to love,
And let it take your heart into its palms and rub
So-ever-gently, just to feel the pain; its like a drug
Which grows on you like weed you start to laugh
When someone else is feeling it.
You no longer try and to escape the tears youve made.
You bought a cup to collect tear-dropsto keep the memories that fade;
The ones that hurt: fake friends, breakups, arguments and lies
They make you feel alive, but in reality the Devil tries
To bring you closer to him. He is the one who holds your heart;
The one who whispers in the dark,
And makes you feel too comfortable in loneliness and sorrow.
Forgive, I plea FORGIVE the ones who hurt you most!
Let go off memories; they are no longer real just a ghost
That you held onto for so long. Forgive, move on and come to me!
I wont let you fall; Ill stand by you for life and you shall see
That life is worth of everything youve done and all the things youll do
And all the things that will be done - by me and you
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Re: Forgive
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th February 2010 @ 11:32:33 AM AEST
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Great message and nice metaphors interlaced with wonderful devotion.
Very nicely done.
Tim
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Re: Forgive
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by thistle_and_fern on
Saturday, 20th February 2010 @ 12:43:59 PM AEST
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| great words, and sentiment, can relatte to all you have said. You caught the emotions wonderfully. |
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Re: Forgive
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by ChaosFactor on
Saturday, 20th February 2010 @ 09:28:53 PM AEST
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| Wonderful sentiment and wonderful advice. Take care. |
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Re: Forgive
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by Anaztasia on
Sunday, 21st February 2010 @ 11:43:32 AM AEST
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| Thank you all for reading. I wrote this in time of a great depression. It's hard to stop yourself from turning into a monster. Pain that's held within can destroy you and the ones you love. Addiction to drugs, alcohol can overcome; thus, making you give up on everything that's important in life. Remember that life is precious. It's short, indeed. |
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