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salt block
Contributed by
elle
on
Saturday, 20th February 2010 @ 07:31:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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my tears speak to me
yet they hide
themselves & their meaning
from the world
I am not strong enough
to share
the random stillness
that engages my thoughts
& when it occurs
to me
that a greater love
is yet to come. . .
or a lesser, lost to the cloudy
talis laden darkness
of my past. . .
how my ache
clarifies for me
that a soul alone
still feels
Copyright ©
elle
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2010-02-20 19:31:35]
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Re: salt block
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by emystar on
Saturday, 20th February 2010 @ 08:37:55 PM AEST
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Very strong,touching write.
huggs, blessings,
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Re: salt block
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st February 2010 @ 02:18:08 AM AEST
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Re: salt block
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by Spike on
Sunday, 21st February 2010 @ 03:45:02 AM AEST
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I was thinking the same thing today, though not so eloquently.
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Re: salt block
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by FleurdeSang on
Sunday, 21st February 2010 @ 07:05:04 PM AEST
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This really spoke to me. I can't choose favourites; the poem in its entirety captured the essence of a sadness I have felt for a very long time. Excellent. Superbly written. And I thank you for all of your beautiful comments. Keep spilling, dear friend. Be well.
Warm regards,
~S.
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Re: salt block
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd February 2010 @ 07:28:06 PM AEST
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Written with a soothing sadness this just flows. Gentle and sincere I really enjoyed this write.
take care
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