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Serene Beach
Contributed by
clovermama25
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Saturday, 20th February 2010 @ 08:35:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Waves of deep blue and green,
Circle around, calming me,
The echoing sound mumurs,
Telling a story you wouldn't believe.
The landscape is a sunset,
Bright red mixed with gold,
The sun once hot,
Now tired and old.
The trees cast shadows,
Anyone could see,
The butterflies flutter home,
Beautiful and free.
Cricket starts singing,
Loud and clear,
Waves against the rocks,
Beach sand is near.
Tickling my toes,
The soft sand casts my prints,
I look one last time at the sun,
But just a glimpse.
I walk up the shoreline,
and onto grass,
I can only think to myself,
I wish this could last...
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2010-02-20 20:35:14]
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Re: Serene Beach
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Sunday, 21st February 2010 @ 05:01:23 PM AEST
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It's a beautiful scene, one that makes me want to be there in this cold Winter climate of now.
Especially liked the lines
"The sun once hot,
Now tired and old"
Fantastic.
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