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A FEATHER FELL!
Contributed by
Robert_Edgar_Burns
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Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 03:25:00 PM in AEST
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A feather fell down from the sky.
I dipped its tip till the ink ran dry.
On the parchment are scribed words and dots,
To save for posterity a poets thoughts.
A feather fell down from the sky.
It weighed much more than all your lies.
For even as you spoke to please,
Your words do float away in the slightest breeze.
A feather fell down from the sky,
Now on my grave stone it does lie.
And contained on it the words you said.
Which like me now, even then were dead.
A feather fell down from the sky.
It brushed your cheek and it made you cry.
For then you thought what might have been,
Had your words been true every now and then!
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Robert_Edgar_Burns
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2003-04-11 15:25:00]
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Re: A FEATHER FELL!
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by olasunkanmi on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 04:19:24 PM AEST
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| I love this what a creative words. |
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Re: A FEATHER FELL!
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 05:02:23 PM AEST
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Interesting write, Rob.....
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Re: A FEATHER FELL!
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 06:18:39 PM AEST
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| heartbreaking, cold and so sad Robert, often times people say things not knowing it could be the last words heard, nice brillant write, thanks for sharing this one, |
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Re: A FEATHER FELL!
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by Sk8er909 on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 08:34:13 PM AEST
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i really liked your poem
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Re: A FEATHER FELL!
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by shelby on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 12:23:12 AM AEST
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A true poet. I enjoy everything yo write.
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Re: A FEATHER FELL!
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 06:37:16 PM AEST
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beautiful, simply beautiful....
hugs n' love nessa |
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