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Love
Contributed by
purplestary
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Tuesday, 23rd February 2010 @ 01:31:52 PM in AEST
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Love is like the moon,
rising in the middle of the afternoon
before the sun even thinks about setting,
with one lingering cloud
befriending it in a sky so blue,
that B.B. King gets nervous.
Love is like the warmest day of the year
taking place in the dead of winter
when the freeze sets in,
and it seems to never end.
so, when your riding in your car
and you look up to the sky,
you see that the afternoon moon
is holding hands with a cloud,
the sun is shining so bright
out of jelousy, no doubt,
and your taking in the warmest day of the year
all happening while snow still falls
everywhere, but here.
Remember, that this is love.
always keeping you warm in the cold
and always there when you need it the most
when hope is lost, and the world ruins your day
just look to the sky,
because it will never look so blue,
The sun may never be jelous again,
and tomorrows forcast is calling for ice...
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Re: Love
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by AngelFox on
Tuesday, 23rd February 2010 @ 09:07:47 PM AEST
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| Liked the imagery and setting on this poem. It took me back to some "good old days". Thanks for the flashback. |
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Re: Love
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 26th February 2010 @ 01:24:28 PM AEST
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BRAVO!BRAVO!BRAVO! Roses at your feet.
I've never read a more beautiful explanation of Love............and Love never fails!
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetic talent with us dear.
Warm love
consue |
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Re: Love
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th February 2010 @ 11:25:09 AM AEST
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A veteran poet dropping wisdom
nothing more beautiful than that
I don't know that I've seen love
painted more precisely and cleverly
there is so much depth it's hard
to grasp it all at once
an honor
-D.Truth |
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Re: Love
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by Fuzzy on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2010 @ 08:08:31 AM AEST
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The way you describe love
just paints a picture, in
the readers mind,many
i have read, but also for
me, i have never seen
it described so well.
very beautiful write
so well written
Take care
Fuzzy |
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Re: Love
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by trackiller2006 on
Monday, 8th November 2010 @ 04:15:15 PM AEST
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| 5 stars! 2 thumbs up! Praise for the Queen of Words! I loved this one! |
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Re: Love
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 10th June 2014 @ 12:18:45 PM AEST
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anne, this is verrry pretty, it flows so gently and is
truly so beautiful... so many brilliant lines, may
you ever have ink my friend,
hugs n' love nessa |
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