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The OtherSide
Contributed by
SpoiledBrat
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Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 04:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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When I look in your eyes over there
I see the person who's sometimes there
Then I look again
And guess who's there?
It's the otherside of you
Then she gets up
Where is she going?
She comes over Where I am going
She picks up her hand and starts on hittin
It seems so long The clock is ticking
Then she looks at me and starts skaking me
I begin to struggle.
It seems so long I begin to cry
Then she stoped she walked away!
Then I ran to get away
Away from the hits
Away from the hits
Then she goes away from the spot
I went back
What should I do what should I say
I look back and begin to say
I love you Jolene
I hope you'll change
Copyright ©
SpoiledBrat
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2003-04-11 16:25:00]
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Re: The OtherSide
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by full_blur on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 04:29:32 PM AEST
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| cool poem, i like the fact that the words are really full motion. |
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Re: The OtherSide
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by boricuacd on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 05:04:54 PM AEST
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| good job |
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Re: The OtherSide
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by Sk8er909 on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 09:09:29 PM AEST
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| Good write |
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Re: The OtherSide
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by BlackFire9786 on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 12:42:26 AM AEST
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| This is a great write, it shows your love for this girl even though she deals with this, i pray for you both, Luv ya lotz-Lisa |
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