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Episode
Contributed by
blackbearextraordinaire
on
Thursday, 25th February 2010 @ 07:17:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Once upon a dream come false
Lay a young girl lost, losing a pulse
And once upon a nightmares thrill
The skeletons came out and went for the kill
Smothered by her fantasies and drowning in regret
With her last breath she wondered 'What if we hadn't met?'
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2010-02-25 07:17:28]
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Re: Episode
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by laststarontheleft on
Thursday, 25th February 2010 @ 10:50:34 AM AEST
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Whoah!
This is pretty deep, and quite chilling to say the least!
Very cleverly written, the image this gives me is an extremely vivid one.
Very, very good.......
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