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Love of man (first poem)
Contributed by
Mafezoli
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Friday, 26th February 2010 @ 10:03:29 AM in AEST
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Transcendant in it's perplexity,
Yet truer than Newton's law
Causes faith to prevail on faith and doubt's see-saw
Absent in the hateful
Devoid in our war-ridden world
Most commonly confused for lechery among God's little girls
Oh doubtful ones, who see it all a contradiction
Don't forget what is inside of you,
That which is truer than all convictions
Though this is man's truth,
And to mankind I will continue to plead
We may be doomed to a loveless earth till life begins to cease
If only all humans had the modesty of a bee,
We could enjoy this world and harness our potential in peace and harmony...
But even so! The planets will align, and the Universe may soon crease!
Our mark in time will be nothing but a blemish of God's work, a short and strange absurdity!
Copyright ©
Mafezoli
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2010-02-26 10:03:29]
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Re: Love of man (first poem)
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by Mafezoli on
Friday, 26th February 2010 @ 11:00:21 PM AEST
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Re: Love of man (first poem)
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by Fuzzy on
Saturday, 27th February 2010 @ 08:28:14 AM AEST
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First hello, welcome.
I really did enjoy this write,very thought
provoking, and i think very well written
Take care
Fuzzy |
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Re: Love of man (first poem)
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th February 2010 @ 11:40:56 AM AEST
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Your insight is prolific
nothing but truth in your words
this passage is essential to those in denial
it's a universal effort,but one by one
we must seek all things pure
we must find peace within
before we can begin to heal
humbling, I enjoyed your first poem very much
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