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Silent whispers
Contributed by
wordsy
on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 09:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Silent whispers Deep inside Cast in darkness Where I abide Forgotten slumber Insomnias lust The ticking hours In faithless trust Caught in madness Insanitys trap Lost in darkness A blind mans rap Unknown gestures In failed attempts Scarred in battle Eternitys limp Begotten soul In endless wonder Blundered efforts In useless plunder Distant memories All fade to blue Desperate plead For what is true Always wondering what to do
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2003-04-11 21:25:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Silent whispers
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 11:53:17 PM AEST (User
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I love this poem!!
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Re: Silent whispers
(User Rating: 1 ) by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 10:23:59 AM AEST (User
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A wonderful peice!
I liked this alot! Christina |
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Re: Silent whispers
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 04:43:12 AM AEST (User
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What a great piece of work. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Silent whispers
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 07:01:18 PM AEST (User
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i think this is great, i like your concept here and it kept my interest all the way, great title too:) hugs nessa |
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Re: Silent whispers
(User Rating: 1 ) by ShadowsCloud on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 08:18:04 AM AEST (User
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I think that this is a very good poem. i really enjoyed reading it.
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