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The Reprisal
Contributed by
Inchiostro
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Sunday, 7th March 2010 @ 07:18:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I am trapped in my own hell
Somewhere along the way the fun died and the nightmare began
Now the circle is complete and I am what I made
So I dance
spinning and spinning through this endless forever
my music is the sad song of sorrow and my step is the same
Though I see the faces I can not reach them
they sweep past much too fast.
I hold tight to whats left
for it is my crutch
my cane
and without it I would surly fall
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2010-03-07 19:18:04]
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Re: The Reprisal
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by northernlights on
Sunday, 7th March 2010 @ 11:00:30 PM AEST
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| This is a great write straight from the heart......expressing the turmoil of heartbreak in the spinning and confusion and the desperation of having something to hold on to......my music is the sad song of sorrow.....your poetic truthful expression of your heart creates beauty on the page |
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Re: The Reprisal
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by Inchiostro on
Sunday, 7th March 2010 @ 11:33:09 PM AEST
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| Thank you very much for your compliment. |
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