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Is This The End?
Contributed by
evanz
on
Monday, 8th March 2010 @ 06:52:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Do you ever
Do you ever wake up with no sense of direction
No sense of affection
Lonely
Where you feel down for no reason
And everything you believe in
Seems faint
For I wake up daily in the same place
Wishing I could change
My ways
I try to feel optimistic
But when it comes back to it
Being realistic
I think Im sick
I cant find my ways
Im lost
Am I even here
Or have I set sails
To my own world
In which happiness comes from sorrow
Where every day seems borrowed
But Ive nothing to pay back
Nothing to give
No hope
Wondering
Should I live.
Copyright ©
evanz
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2010-03-08 18:52:16]
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Re: Is This The End?
(User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on
Monday, 8th March 2010 @ 11:10:48 PM AEST
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| You have expressed the feelings of loneliness with depth and sensitivity.... where every day seems borrowed.....the lack of purpose,constantly fighting being down,doubting yourself and an overwhelming sense of hopelessness,released all onto written page with purpose, and with hope, well written |
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Re: Is This The End?
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by chrisdavid on
Tuesday, 9th March 2010 @ 12:14:24 AM AEST
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| There is always a reason to live. I liked this one. |
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