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My Pen with Pain for Ink
Contributed by
blackbearextraordinaire
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Monday, 8th March 2010 @ 09:51:44 PM in AEST
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I'm locked away in this darkness all on my own
And I can feel this loneliness in every single bone
I can see the ones I love inch for the exit, free
I try to pull them back and hold them close to me
And everyday i'm weaker; they further away
Try as I might i can't make them all stay
And i know I'm wrong to even try
But i feel without them i may wither and die
I hesitate to reach out; but ache when I don't
i want you to stay but i think that you won't
But I've such a long time to hurt and to grieve
Over friends who may or may never leave
I just want someone to hold me close or hold me dear
to make me fell loved for as long as I'm here
I'm so displaced and discontent
and all these heartaches won't relent
So, with my pen with pain for ink
I'll this for all of you and let you all think:
So, I'm sorry, and i love you more then you can know
Cause I'm sure I don't let all my feelings show
I don't say how I feel, for fear you'd not quite agree
But I was made to love you and for you to love me
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Re: My Pen with Pain for Ink
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by shelby on
Monday, 8th March 2010 @ 10:35:02 PM AEST
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You bared your heart and soul here, my favorite kind of poem.
I almost had a tear in my eye while reading this it hits close to my own heart right now..
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Re: My Pen with Pain for Ink
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by northernlights on
Monday, 8th March 2010 @ 11:33:31 PM AEST
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| Beautifully written for its honesty and what a wonderful strong declaration.... but I was made to love you and for you to love me, thankyou for pouring out your heart in such a lovely way |
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Re: My Pen with Pain for Ink
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by Inchiostro on
Tuesday, 9th March 2010 @ 01:20:56 AM AEST
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I also have tears for you brother, its a rough road we travel, I only wish that i could put pen to paper and have such beauty flow forth.
Thank you for your honesty, and though you may walk a dark road today, remember that every night has its morning, and every winter its spring.
Live, learn, and alway love, let the world do as it will.
People will always talk and haters will always hate it is the way of things don't let it touch you.
~Ink |
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Re: My Pen with Pain for Ink
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by fadingaway on
Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 10:53:25 PM AEST
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| Heart and soul. beautiful flow and rhyming. |
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