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Away with Words
Contributed by
spike
on
Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 04:44:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I peak out from between the lines,
looking for the tell-tale signs
of sweet enrapture in your eyes
and maybe, just one sigh
Ill wear you down with soft, soft teasing
hypnotic rhythms and subtle phrasing;
Ill have your heart, and more I reckon
as my sinuous lines irresistibly beckon
For I have no key to pick your locks
nor lyre to swoon you onto rocks;
just a voice to say your name
and verse to lay you low
Truth is,
its not a web of words Im spinning
or a trap to snare your heart;
but a bed of love song,
the covers pulled back,
for your beauty.
Copyright ©
spike
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2010-03-10 04:44:59]
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Re: Away with Words
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by Fuzzy on
Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 04:49:37 AM AEST
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What a wonderful write, just wonderful.
and the presentation,Beautiful.
Take care
Fuzzy |
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Re: Away with Words
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by northernlights on
Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 05:04:42 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written especially like the last verse |
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Re: Away with Words
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by laststarontheleft on
Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 05:16:02 AM AEST
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Mmmmm, pure dreaminess!!
Your words are enchanting and cast a spell
of magic across my eyes here Spike!
Absolutely loved it....
Star x x x |
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Re: Away with Words
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by longhaircg on
Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 06:25:33 AM AEST
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YUM, the taste is so sweet, so nicely writen,
thankyou I melted into this.
SP |
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Re: Away with Words
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 02:54:34 PM AEST
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Such a unique layout and just wonderfully written.
"its not a web of words I’m spinning
or a trap to snare your heart;
That is a great line.
take care
duff |
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