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raining memories
Contributed by
longhaircg
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Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 07:06:56 AM in AEST
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LoveRemembered
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The rain gently hits my window pains,
thunder rolling across the sky,
brings a single tear to my eye,
sweet memories come crashing in,
always bring me back to him.
rain pouring down, wrapped in his arms,
heard not a sound, but two hearts beating,
crash of thunder, pulled us under,deeper in the spell,
no words ever needed,
thunder spoke for us, closer together we became,
as our hearts spoke louder then the rain.
but tonight it gently sings on my window sill,
bringing back memories at will,
quieting now this heart of mine,
bringing me back to present time,
singing me to sleep,
crashing thunder lets me know Im still alive.
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longhaircg
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Re: raining memories
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by purplestary on
Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 08:22:18 AM AEST
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| this was a beautifull write. it pulls the reader into your memory with you..and paints the picture of the storm and the memories. this was brilliant. |
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Re: raining memories
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by northernlights on
Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 11:31:24 AM AEST
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| That wonderful feeling of being secure brought back to you in sad memory. Nature being the comforter and then the reminder that you are very much alive to create more memories, well written |
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Re: raining memories
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by laststarontheleft on
Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 12:03:36 PM AEST
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Lovingly captured, this was a real joy to read from beginning to end!
Thank you for sharing such a priceless memory......
Star x x x |
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Re: raining memories
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 02:20:36 PM AEST
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Turning back the pages triggered by the beauty of rain. Wonderful imagery and such a grace in your writing. I enjoyed reading this.
take care
duff |
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Re: raining memories
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by Fuzzy on
Thursday, 11th March 2010 @ 07:10:43 AM AEST
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enjoyed this,Rain seems to bring back
memories,this write is very Beautiful
very well written
Take care
Fuzzy |
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Re: raining memories
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 4th May 2010 @ 07:44:29 PM AEST
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ohhh, this is so beautiful, rain does that to me too, simply loved this,
hugs n' love nessa |
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