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Burried
Contributed by
fadingaway
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Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 02:23:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Slash the knife across my wrists
We'll watch the crimson flow like this
Slip the noose around your neck
We'll watch you drop and start to kick
Put the barrel to my lips
I'll kiss you when the bullet hits
The poisons coursing through our veins
What's killing us should be so plain
I'm bleeding, to see you love me.
Breathing, because you hate me.
I'm screaming, I'm bleeding.
What's left is all but breathing.
Watch me fall into the stones
Tearing flesh and breaking bones
Watch me cry myself to sleep
I think I'm Falling in to deep.
Take this pain cause it's not real,
and leave me with what's left to feel
Once were put beneath the earth
Taking back the bane of birth
Back to ash, revert to dust.
It's killing me to gain you trust.
and once the memory fades away
The end is near, I'm here to stay.
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2010-03-10 14:23:51]
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Re: Burried
(User Rating: 1 )
by JakerBaker88 on
Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 11:44:44 PM AEST
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| This was a powerful piece of poetry. I felt your desperation, anger, and vulnerability. Your imagery was also spot on; made the poem come to life for me. Brilliant work here. |
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