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Silly Me
Contributed by
JakerBaker88
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Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 09:42:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Silly of me,
Believing I could snare such a heart.
That I could ever beguile him!
Me?
With my awkward smile,
Gangly body,
Tangled hair,
And stilted laugh?
No, I was wrong.
I over stepped my boundries;
Tumbled down the rabbit hole,
Into Wonderland
Feeling bested by Twiddle D and Twiddle Dumb.
Pathetic really,
Imagining that I could tug at his heart strings,
As much as he has tugged at mine.
Ha!-----
Laughable how I trusted in Loves song;
Running towards Her tune like a giddy school girl,
Mad with loving
And mad with longing too.
I was bewitched by a forked tongue,
Promising me the moon and the stars---
Leading me to my doom.
Silly of me,
Believing I could dare be his sweetheart.
That I could ever seem worthwhile to him!
Me?
Without the glamor,
The posture,
Or the sultry air of most women?
Yes, I was wrong.
Dreaming of true Loves kiss,
Only ends in tragedy -------
For men rarely appreciate such sentimentality.
Copyright ©
JakerBaker88
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2010-03-10 21:42:01]
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Re: Silly Me
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by fadingaway on
Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 10:28:09 PM AEST
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Very good write.
The last line is very true. except for this man.
Very captivating write
bravo. |
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Re: Silly Me
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by northernlights on
Wednesday, 10th March 2010 @ 10:41:05 PM AEST
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| What a wonderful write, very creative and unique way of expressing the raised hopes of love being dashed and dealing with the aftermath of fighting to rebuild self esteem, I really like the line tumbled down the rabbit hole into wonderland....can relate to that too much I think lol |
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Re: Silly Me
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by Omen on
Thursday, 11th March 2010 @ 02:49:31 AM AEST
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Very well written and so true. I know those feelings all too well .... Well done,
Omen x |
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Re: Silly Me
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by Inchiostro on
Thursday, 11th March 2010 @ 12:03:33 PM AEST
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| good write, really cant say anything else. |
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Re: Silly Me
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th March 2010 @ 04:41:12 PM AEST
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A great write with fantastic imagery. The men who don't or can't appreciate the sentimental side of love are fools and it's there loss not to take part. This was a stimulating write for the mind and very well written.
take care
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Re: Silly Me
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th April 2010 @ 01:27:18 AM AEST
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Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. There are quite a few guys that like awkward smiles, gangly bodies, tangled hair, & sentimentality. Perhaps you are just trying to tug at the wrong heart strings.
This poem really conveys the emotion of hurt and is well written. However, dreams can come true. For real, I know from personal experience. Try not beating yourself up and think of this as a test drive until the real one comes along.
Take care and keep 'em coming.
Tim
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