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Identity verse
Contributed by
Conor_B
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Thursday, 11th March 2010 @ 02:47:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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There's the person you reflect,
and the person you strive to be.
But it's the middle-ground that forms you.
It made a mockery of me.
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2010-03-11 14:47:51]
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Re: Identity verse
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by Mars on
Thursday, 11th March 2010 @ 08:31:09 PM AEST
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Normally I'm not such a great fan of short poems, but there is something here. So who we envision ourselves to be, alone, can be part of who we are now? Maybe I'm not looking at it in quite the right way, but there was some line crossed when I devalued you with my own dreams in that last line.
Worth every bit of the read. |
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