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Laying on the Ground, To You I Call
Contributed by
Jen_unknown_to_myself
on
Thursday, 11th March 2010 @ 09:28:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Laying on the Ground, To You I Call
Laying on the ground,
Looking up toward the night,
In emotions I drown,
Lost, Is my will to fight.
So beautiful the stars,
So bright and brilliant,
So enticing are the scars,
So dull and resilient.
Im now numb,
To this life,
I have no green thumb,
I cause only strife.
Laying on the ground,
Clouds cover the night,
Dont want to look around,
Lost is my sight.
So dark are the wisps,
So dark and condescending,
So thick is the mist,
So unwanted is this reminiscing.
Im now crying,
I feel so lost,
I feel like dying,
Is that the cost?
Rain is falling down,
It has a cold bite,
I dont hear a sound,
Soon I wont see light.
So cold are the drops,
Reflecting my emotions,
Life is so full of props,
I havent a notion.
I dont want to see,
End it all,
I dont want to breathe,
With my last breath, to you I call.
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Jen_unknown_to_myself
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2010-03-11 21:28:31]
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Re: Laying on the Ground, To You I Call
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by fadingaway on
Thursday, 11th March 2010 @ 10:25:20 PM AEST
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Beautifully sad, with great rhyming.
Another superb piece.
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