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What Still Remains?
Contributed by
regent
on
Friday, 12th March 2010 @ 12:58:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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Love dissapears slowly like a
cigarette in the rearview mirror
each day passing leaves me more barren
hatred and malace becomes stagnantly clearer
You stand on high pedastles waiting like a
hawk on power lines
intent to drive my mind to the ground
and catch me in the claws of your embrace
The kindered spirit once open to thought
becomes hindered by your self loathing like a
fallen leaf in winters frost
Somewhere down a road where joy was lost
In hours passing one can count the battles like
distant fires in the midnight black
Their warmth and happyness
a fading memory lost in the optical illusion
I can hear yonder shores and waves
bearing freedom from your tainted embrace like
a key to a shackled man in chains
I think Ill go to them now, and spare what still remains
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regent
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2010-03-12 12:58:02]
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Re: What Still Remains?
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by Chamaron on
Friday, 12th March 2010 @ 10:30:53 PM AEST
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| Very strong, poignant imagery that really pushes out the pain. Excellent write. |
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