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Friend
Contributed by
lewis1030
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Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 04:50:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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The glow of her
smile,
The light that shines as she
enters the room,
The grace she has when
she speaks,
Oh what a delight she is to
meet,
Intelligent, but
beautiful,
Very Accomplished, but
Humble,
Made History for a
lifetime,
Being a Black Woman
for all time.
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2010-03-13 04:50:02]
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Re: Friend
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by Mars on
Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 07:23:39 AM AEST
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| Interesting how you broke your lines. Try reading only every other line and it gives much of the same, or more, impression. The descriptions, attributes, are also definitely not bad I suppose. |
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