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LOVE Poster
Contributed by
dj88fan
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Saturday, 13th March 2010 @ 11:08:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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As I gaze upon the blue barrier
I see four simple letters
Shouting at me
Telling me what life means
I started with the L
Life has just begun
Luck forced on my side
Living with a meaning
O falls into place
Only one person can fill this void
Other people may want too
Only I can decide
V flies over
Vacancy does not glow
Venting no more
Victory has approached me
E has became one
Elegant lady approaches me
Eagerly staring into her eyes
Ending with a sunset
LOVE has came
Luck is here
Only decisions await
Victory is mine
Ends with lips together
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2010-03-13 23:08:04]
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Re: LOVE Poster
(User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on
Tuesday, 16th March 2010 @ 04:01:40 AM AEST
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| How original, I like this,.... telling what life means, well if you are starting life with this premise then you are on the right track.I like the self empowerment running throught this.... only decision await, Victory is mine. I hope you make the right decisions and continue in life as empowered as you express yourself in your writing |
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