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You and the way I feel
Contributed by
BrandenW13
on
Sunday, 14th March 2010 @ 12:57:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Everything I see
reminds me
we aren't together
tough I try to be near
Your hair
Your face
Your love
Your grace
I deal
with trying
I'm lost
and silent about
Your smile
Your warmth
Your love
Your eyes
I talk to you
do you notice
I smile, pretend
I'm not falling for
Your way
Your voice
Your thoughts
Your presence
Everything I see
reminds me
that I am
not with you
Copyright ©
BrandenW13
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2010-03-14 12:57:06]
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Re: You and the way I feel
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by Chamaron on
Sunday, 14th March 2010 @ 01:15:21 PM AEST
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Intriguing structure. I think you really captured the agony of it in "I deal / with trying". Excellent write, hope it all works out.
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