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Poem of My Life
Contributed by
JakerBaker88
on
Monday, 15th March 2010 @ 10:28:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Silence overwhelms me,
Pulling me in two.
Yearning for sound,
I scream!
My voice sends shockwaves,
And ripples of noise through the air----
Yet, all remains mute.
Despite my tantrum,
The world continues to march on
Ignoring my existence.
Copyright ©
JakerBaker88
... [
2010-03-15 10:28:11]
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Re: Poem of My Life
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th March 2010 @ 12:09:29 PM AEST
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Sounding off for help yet ears are deaf or pretend to be making you feel even more lonely when that didn't seem possible. I like this write as I can relate at times. Well written.
take care
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Re: Poem of My Life
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by laststarontheleft on
Monday, 15th March 2010 @ 02:31:41 PM AEST
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Really well executed......
This reminds me of a recurring dream I used to have. I would be looking at my
life being played out in front of me, but I was stuck behind a thick glass window
just banging and banging at the glass trying to be noticed by someone - anyone. It can make you very angry.
A powerful and passionate piece x
Star x x x
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Re: Poem of My Life
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by DrcGaimer on
Monday, 15th March 2010 @ 04:28:27 PM AEST
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| Isn't it so ironic how a person can feel so alone in a world full of people. Good one. |
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Re: Poem of My Life
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by Inchiostro on
Monday, 15th March 2010 @ 10:09:22 PM AEST
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Don't feel that way!
Everything you do changes the world around you. |
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Re: Poem of My Life
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 16th March 2010 @ 01:45:55 AM AEST
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| Very strong poem capturing the anguish of not being heard and feeling dispensible and insignificant, well written |
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