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SUN
Contributed by
harsh
on
Tuesday, 16th March 2010 @ 12:26:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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When the sun climbed down the stairs and walked away
I watched it go and waited for another day
Bidding it farewell brought a tear to my eyes
Not looking back it disappeared in the skies
Hoping it would return forever to me
Wanted to crush it in my arms not letting it free
So when one fine day it came across the sky
I called it up aloud and held my arms high
Slowly it came and rested on my chest
I whispered in its ears that it should never leave the nest
It struggled a lot but my arms didnt budge
I told it to stay and not walk the trudge
But soon its breath began to fall
Not realizing it I still stood tall
It whimpered and struggled till its heart gave away
And I waited with it until the sky turned grey
After a while when I dislodged the embrace
Empty were its eyes, blank was its face
I sat down there and thought in dismay
I should have let it climb down and walk away
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Re: SUN
(User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 30th December 2018 @ 09:05:06 AM AEST
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Your belief in it and comfort was all you could do
never give up
keep hope alive
well done..... |
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