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I'm dieing in silence
Contributed by
gravy
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Tuesday, 16th March 2010 @ 12:23:02 PM in AEST
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From the the first words you spoke
My hart began to ache at your every pause
After the first look in your eyes
My soul drained with every departed gaze
Since the first kiss of your lips
My breath grew faint waiting for the next
The first touch of your body
My muscles became weak starving for more
But it's in the time apart where my killer lives
The unknowing, the uncertainty
The if there will be
The if you still want
.
I'm dieing in silence
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Re: I'm dieing in silence
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by TheDevas on
Wednesday, 17th March 2010 @ 01:42:14 PM AEST
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| Wow, that's really good. It conveys so much feeling while still remaining succinct. Good job. |
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