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A Vow
Contributed by
JakerBaker88
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Tuesday, 16th March 2010 @ 08:55:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Sitting beneath the willow tree,
Gazing upwards towards the stars
I made a wish------
A sacred vow to conquor this lonliness----
To simply live.
Copyright ©
JakerBaker88
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2010-03-16 20:55:56]
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Re: A Vow
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by Inchiostro on
Wednesday, 17th March 2010 @ 02:03:31 AM AEST
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You go girl!! lol or something
I like this though, there is just something about willow trees that is awesome, and you invoke a lot of strong imagery for so few words. keep it up.
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Re: A Vow
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by laststarontheleft on
Wednesday, 17th March 2010 @ 09:51:47 AM AEST
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Seeking inspiration from the stars for your desire to be stronger, a powerful moment.....
Nicely written x
Lisa x x x |
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Re: A Vow
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by Ambivalence on
Sunday, 21st March 2010 @ 02:46:14 PM AEST
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i good promise u made to yourself. i enjoyed this hopeful poem :)
take care
-K.Z. |
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