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I JUST WANT YOU TO KNOW
Contributed by
chrisdavid
on
Wednesday, 17th March 2010 @ 08:25:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I look out of my window
I look up to the sky
And I ask the question 'Why?'
I still see your smile
I see your face
And now you're gone without a trace
I know you will never see me
But this is how it's meant to be
I seem so empty
My heart sinks so deep
Everytime I start to weep
My hurt is silent
I still have the pain
And everyday it feels the same
I know you will never see me
But this is how it's meant to be
I wonder how you live your life
Up there
I hope you can still feel the love
Somewhere
I just want you to know
That I loved you so
And how much I really cared for you
Even though now you're gone
My life still goes on
I don't know what I'm going to do
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chrisdavid
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2010-03-17 08:25:13]
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Re: I JUST WANT YOU TO KNOW
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by laststarontheleft on
Wednesday, 17th March 2010 @ 10:08:22 AM AEST
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This is beautifully written....
I can feel the pain and anguish jumping off the page from every line.
A very commendable write, full of emotion and truthfulness.
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Re: I JUST WANT YOU TO KNOW
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by Fuzzy on
Wednesday, 17th March 2010 @ 11:44:18 AM AEST
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Very Beautiful write.
Take care
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